Monday, March 24, 2008

Ho Ya!

Ok! Since there was discussion on whether or not my last poem was a limerick, I shall now attempts to write a proper limerick, per the AABBA rhyme scheme, with typical limerick meter.

There once was a mean fat old boar,
Who always demanded "want more!",
Then one day a slave,
Threw him in a cave,
to which he shouted: "What bore!".

HO YA! Ok, I'll admit that stunk. But it's past midnight, what do you expect? A Shakespearean sonnet? Not a bad idea actually.

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more fair and more temperate...

-End Transmission

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow....nice try with the limerick Dom, but it was obscenely bad.

Have a good day!

Anonymous said...

obscenely bad? Not quite. Really bad, yes. Obscenely, no.

Atta said...

well...(that's a deep subject!) I like your lime, dime, prime one better!

Michael Swift said...

An Excuse for a Terrible Game of HeroScape:

Stompy and Chompy went lame,
and Syvarris kept missing his aim.
The Incredible Hulk
Just sat down and sulked
But guess who gets all of the blame?

The Highland Sage said...

I like it. We should put something in there about how the glyphs, didn't fail to miff, or something like that.