Ok! Since there was discussion on whether or not my last poem was a limerick, I shall now attempts to write a proper limerick, per the AABBA rhyme scheme, with typical limerick meter.
There once was a mean fat old boar,
Who always demanded "want more!",
Then one day a slave,
Threw him in a cave,
to which he shouted: "What bore!".
HO YA! Ok, I'll admit that stunk. But it's past midnight, what do you expect? A Shakespearean sonnet? Not a bad idea actually.
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more fair and more temperate...
-End Transmission
5 comments:
Wow....nice try with the limerick Dom, but it was obscenely bad.
Have a good day!
obscenely bad? Not quite. Really bad, yes. Obscenely, no.
well...(that's a deep subject!) I like your lime, dime, prime one better!
An Excuse for a Terrible Game of HeroScape:
Stompy and Chompy went lame,
and Syvarris kept missing his aim.
The Incredible Hulk
Just sat down and sulked
But guess who gets all of the blame?
I like it. We should put something in there about how the glyphs, didn't fail to miff, or something like that.
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